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Some people think that it is best to accept a bad situation

2019-8-24 12:45| 发布者: admin| 查看: 114| 评论: 0

简介:Some people think that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
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Some people think that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an  unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

 

 

It can not be denied that life is changeable and every one may get into a dilemma,how to deal with this occasion has caused a heated debate.Some individuals believe we are supposed to accept it,while other people harbor the view that we should improve this kind of situation .Personally ,I agree the latter.

 

First of all, it is usually regarded that it is hopeless and weak to accept the circumstance but do not take any measures to change it.And it will get worse and worse without any doubt .For instance ,if you have an occupation with low salary and you never make any effort to practice your skills ,maybe you will never get promotion.As a consequence, you can not provide your family with good living standard and satisfied their further demand .I believe that only the weak will give in to life ,conversely,what the strong  consider is how to make it better.

Moreover,It is the dilemma that always motivate us to pursuit and accomplish a higher objective. Only by making full use this opportunity can we transfer it into a turning point and realize our value. Look back to the history,those who make great contribution to the development of society, such as the scientists and statesmen ,most of them were living in a life filled with difficulties ,.However,they never lost faith and then became the master of their lives.

 

This is not to say that we should not accept the condition,it is obvious that accepting it is the first step,which can help us to have a better understand of what looks like presently and to be optimistic.After we have a direction and analysis of the current situation ,what we need to do is moving forward to the next step ,to exert ourselves to make a difference.

In conclusion,faced with a hard condition,it’s wise to make a change rather than just accept it,which will make you aware how strong and how diligent you can be.And absolutely your efforts will pay off in a long run .

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