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Learning a foreign language is a significant part of our studies

2019-8-24 12:49| 发布者: admin| 查看: 84| 评论: 0

简介:Learning a foreign language is a significant part of our studies due to the globalization. Some experts hold the belief that it is better for children to learn a foreign language at primary school rat ...
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Learning a foreign language is a significant part of our studies due to the globalization. Some experts hold the belief that it is better for children to learn a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. I think the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks.

Children can better understand a foreign language if they start to learn it earlier. When they are at primary school, they do not have too much homework and their schedules are flexible. Therefore, they can take more time and energy in studying foreign languages. They have sufficient time to review what they have learned in the class.

Besides, it is easier for children at that age to achieve their potential and learn something new, because their brain is still developing. For example, if adults want to learn a foreign language, they find they cannot memorize it well. But when these adults are children, they can learn to master their native languages.

On the contrary, it also has a disadvantage. Children at primary school are supposed to have happy and cheerful child lives. If they begin to learn a foreign language at that time, they may lose their spare time for other extra curriculum activities, which will also affects their developments of hobbies.

To sum up, though encouraging children to study a foreign language at primary school may make them lose some of their time, I believe its benefits outweigh this drawback.

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