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It is generally believed that

2019-8-24 12:53| 发布者: admin| 查看: 82| 评论: 0

简介:It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents instance for sport or music ,and others are not, however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good ...

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain  talents instance for sport or music ,and others are not, however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician,

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

 

Recently, there has been a heated discussion on whether children can grow up to an expert, ranging from sportsman to musicians, out of instincts or by acquisition of training. From my point of view, I agree that the combination of the two points contribute to people’s achievement to play sports or music, since both the nurture and nature count much.

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Some people hold the view that talented children are more likely to gain success to be a expert like sports player of musicians. They tend to acquire knowledge and skills more easily than normal ones, which lays a solid foundation for exercising and practicing, leading to a promising future. Without the gifts, people may find it difficult to get the key rhythm or strong body for training, which is detrimental to the future

 

On the other hand, other people agree that training sessions indeed make a difference to children’s growth to play sports or music. As the saying goes, ‘practice makes perfect’. Though trial and error. Ordinary children can compensate for what they do not own originally and find their own way to exercise sports of play piano. In addition, though equipped with talents, if not gaining enough training, the gifted children will show a poor performance during the competition and miss out on the chances to become a well-known musician or sportsman,

 

In my opinion, I suggest that combining the innate talents and acquired trainings a=is the best approach for children to succeed as a musician or sportsman. Without nature talents, the training will take up more time and end up in low efficiency to progress while without adequate training and acquisition, children will be trapped at the very beginning and not able to move forwards. Equipped with the two aspects, one can set a solid ground and improve his or her skills smoothly.

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