The
Equal Importance of Inner and Outer Efforts
At
the moment, there is a heated discussion whether the influence from parents are
more significant than the outer space. In my opinion, I suppose that the
education from parents could be essential to children, while the hard work or
other qualities could also be supportive. 丫丫培训类别: 雅思口语,托福口语,日常英语口语,商务英语口语,以及幼儿英语口语。 同时本公司也承接雅思口语陪练,留学服务,雅思作文批改等业务。 如下为同学雅思原文: The
enlightenment in young age could really help children build a higher starting
point. Parents personal tutor in some basic subjects could help children
understand basic knowledge more effectively, for which the children could find
it more understandable to have a further study in various subjects which are
complicated to cope with. For instance, if a child could know what are the
nouns and adjectives in Chinese then learning the grammar of English could be
much more easier. Therefore, it is useful for children to have some positive
influence by parents.
Otherwise,
positive qualities and outer education could also be important for children's
success. As the old saying goes, a genius is successful because of 99% hard
work and 1% gift. Without the struggling of the children themselves, nothing
would come. For instance, there was a gifted child zhongyong who has had great
talent when he was at a young age, nevertheless, he was sent out to make money
to the relatives without any study. After years, he became an average person
without any skill. Therefore, hard work could be another point of great in
importance.
In
conclusion, the domestic education as well as the outer expansion from children
themselves could be equally important as well. Both of them could not be
ignored in the development of children. 如下为外教修改后的作文: 如下为下载链接(包含了同学原片以及修改后的,请下载后电脑查看,手机无法看到完整版):
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