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Advertising can influence the way people think

2019-8-24 13:07| 发布者: admin| 查看: 78| 评论: 0

简介:Advertising can influence the way people think, so it has negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?
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Advertising can influence the way people think, so it has negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?

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1.       广告有消极影响 误导我们商品信息 虚假信息

2.       消极影响 从众心理 浪费钱 买不必要的东西

3.       但是有积极影响 可以让我们认识更多商品 以方便我们比较

 

It is common that advertisements can be seen everywhere, such as on TV, in the newspaper or on the internet. Many manufacturers try to use more unique methods to make their promotion appealing. I personally agree this opinion. 给出观点 agree or disagree

 

It is true that advertising sometimes have bad influence. They could make us misunderstand the true information of the goods. Just like the hamburger selling, some managers want to attract more customs, thus they exaggerate the size of hamburgers and make it more delicious in the advertising pictures, but the real size is much smaller. Actually it is a sort of fake news for citizens because they could tell whether this goods is the one that they really want or not. What is more, advertising can change residents’ value and make them pursuit something that they could not afford it but others do. People like to follow the other people, especially the people they like. It is common that a famous handsome singer becomes the representative of luxury brand, and a lot of teenagers like him. So these teenagers may buy these expensive goods to support their idol, which is difficult for them to afford them and unnecessary.

 

However, I could not deny that advertising can also make a positive difference. Through the media, people can know more high-quality products, so that they can make a comparation of the same thing with different brands and find the best one. For example, people used to know the only kind of milk in their city. If the other managers of different brand of milk come to advertise, citizens then realize that they could choose other kinds of milk they prefer, thus they maybe more satisfied with the goods they buy. At the same time, advertising is also helpful to the salesmen to improve their performance.

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