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The chart below shows percentages of young people

2019-8-24 13:21| 发布者: admin| 查看: 106| 评论: 0

简介:The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008.
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The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008.

The bar graph illustrates the proportion of different ways to solve the global warming chosen by four different nation’s youngest in 2008.

It is obvious that the most of young people in Portugal prefer changing life style to figure out the environmental problem,accounting for about 44%.The percentage of government regulations and advanced technology are equal with 40%,which is higher than that in none of these by 10% in Portugal.

Young polish choose government regulation most with 30%,followed by life style and none of these similarly with about 26%.Advanced technology ranks the last,representing 10%.

In romanian people’s opinion,the youngest consider government regulation and advanced technology have the same effect to solve the global warming with 20%.Additionally,life style takes up similarity with none of these with around 16%.

Dutch young people think advanced technology and none of these occupy the same proportion about 30%.The figure of life style takes up less half of it with 13%,followed by government regulation.

Overall,Portugal youngest think changing life style is most important.Polish support government control most.While advanced technology is accepted by romanian and dutch.

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