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Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university

2019-8-24 15:15| 发布者: admin| 查看: 158| 评论: 0

简介:Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. Do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, most people learn academic study at university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. Do you agree or disagree?

Educational has become one critical issue that captures public concern in consideration on whet is the best approach for student. Some people hold the view that academic study is the most effective way, while others think we should encourage student to learn vocational skills. I agree with the latter.

Vocational skills is a crucial ability that always neglect by students, because we normally use a pen or and a paper to answer the superficial question without vocation skills in order to pass the test. But in fact, vocation skills is necessary for every student to study, because it can provide meaningful experiences that can not replaced by a book. Only by student get experiences who can practice the academic study into daily life.

In addition, those who have studied vocational skills more are easier to find a ideally job. For example, in most countries the manager tend to find a employee who has a outstanding vocational skills with any circumstance. By comparison it is hard for those concentrate on academic study with no practice skills to find a well-paid job.

That is not to say that we should neglect the academic study. Because academic study is the basic of vocation skills, without which any practice is imagination with no support. But practice is still more suitable for the majority of student in this social condition.

In conclusion, I personally think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more. However, academic study can not be neglect at the same time. So the best approach is moderation.

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