请选择 进入手机版 | 继续访问电脑版

咨询热线:8:00-24:00

15081836179

丫丫雅思教育

yy1.com

the increasing business and culture

2019-8-24 15:19| 发布者: admin| 查看: 441| 评论: 0

简介:Some people believe that the increasing business and culture between different countries is a positive phenomenon.
      丫丫培训类别:
    雅思口语,托福口语,日常英语口语,商务英语口语,以及幼儿英语口语。
    同时本公司也承接雅思口语陪练,留学服务,雅思作文批改等业务。

 如下为同学雅思原文:

Some people believe that the increasing business and culture between different countries is a positive phenomenon.

Others believe that this could lead to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 

With the rapid development of global economy in recent decades , a vast majority of people regard that various countries interact with each other via commerce and civilization has its irreplaceable benefits, however, others insist the opposite idea, which could cause absent of their own specific character of their nation. As far as I consider, the interaction brings more advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Unfortunitly, it became a noticed problem that more and more youth addicted with certain foreign cultures without  self-distinguish , which could decrease the influence of national civilizations. Secondly, the gap between rich and poor may be even wider between countries’trade.    

Gone are days when people expert not contacting with foreigner whatever through the travel, study or work. Firstly, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on the visitors form different countries, which did help for some rural areas. For instance, my hometown became a hot tourism destination since the rape flowers all over the mountains and plains as well as unique local culture. Local citizens has got an army of benefits such as update public facilities, transpotations, eduation even it  was a small village. Besides that, oversea study changed lots of youth of their the future career because of knowing the latest information or technologies, due to the horizon of them were be broaden. What’s more, the awareness of tolerance and understand  with other nation’s culture has been increasing through the all kinds of social medias, which reduced the conflicts among multiple cultures.

 In a conclusion, any foreign culture must go through the process of assimilation, conflict or partial integration and convergence with the national culture, which would bring more benefits than drawbacks.

如下为外教修改后的作文:

如下为下载链接(包含了同学原片以及修改后的,请下载后电脑查看,手机无法看到完整版):

雅思作文批改.rar

收藏 邀请

丫丫雅思客服

微信:chengxin88662211

经验:12年

案例:6857

擅长:雅思

个人基本情况: 11年前,毕业于英语教育专业的我,进入到了留学行业。我希望把合适的学生送到适合的海外院校,希望在我的帮忙下孩子们能实现更高的人生价值! 工作经历和经验。欢迎您联系我的微信:chengxin88662211 专注于雅思留学服务。

成功案例

院校信息


预约评估
返回顶部
  • 预约评估