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The graph illustrates the tonnages of shipments delivered

2019-8-24 15:36| 发布者: admin| 查看: 131| 评论: 0

简介:The graph illustrates the tonnages of shipments delivered in the Uk in 28 years time(1974-2002) by four different transportation methods.

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The graph illustrates the tonnages of shipments delivered in the Uk in 28 years time(1974-2002) by four different transportation methods.

The amount of commodities transported by road remained dominant in this period, although it experienced a fluctuation from 1924 to 1995 .but that  upwards trend was witnessed(78 million tonnes in 1995 to 98 million tonnes in 2002).On the other hand. Pipeline, another way to transport merchandises, Seemed to be the least popular among the four, although. The amount of shipments delivered by pipeline steadily climbed from 5 million tonnes in 1974 to 22 million tonnes in 2002.

As for the quantifies of goods transported by water and rail, they were equal to each other initially(both 40 million tonnes),After year 1978,the amount of shipments transported by water outnumbered that of rail. From 1986,the gap between these  two ways remain approximately at 20 tonnes.

Overall, rood, a predominant transportation in UK, constituted the majority of all the goods transported in 28 years. As to rail and water, albeit keep equlity for a short period of time. The gap between them was eventually widen.


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