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The pie chart shows the proportion of the energy

2019-8-24 15:41| 发布者: admin| 查看: 228| 评论: 0

简介:The pie chart shows the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.
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The pie chart shows the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

The chart presents statistics of the source of produced energy over the course of 1985 to 2003. According to the chart, the distribution has dramatical changes from the year 1985 to 2003.

 Oil is the most used source of energy of all time, albeit the proportion plunges to 39% in 2003 form 52% in 1985. Coming in second on the pie of 1985 is nuclear, making up 22%, but then in 2003 it declined to 17%. Rounding about the top three in 1985 is natural gas, which has a considerable increase during the period from 1985 to 2003, rises to 23% from 13%. As regards to coal, it rises to 13% from 8% during the 18 years. Last but not least, hydrogen remains the same.

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