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Today, more and more people pay attention the friends of choosing methods

2019-10-15 16:11| 发布者: admin| 查看: 294| 评论: 0

简介:Today, more and more people pay attention the friends of choosing methods. Some of them think that the people who have same opinions is better. However, others think that the friends who are not alway ...
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Today, more and more people pay attention the friends of choosing methods. Some of them think that the people who have same opinions is better. However, others think that the friends who are not always agree with us is better.

 

On one hand, staying with friends who have the dame opinions can make us feel enjoyable during the interaction with each other. Because when we are chatting, we can make decision easily, such as restaurants, destination of holiday, even the career in short-term and long-term. For example, when people hope to improve their education or skills of working, the friends who have same opinions can help them to analyze the significant of each options and make the satisfaction decisions which are made almostly are the facts that the people hope to do based on their same opinions.

 

On the other hand, the friends who have different opinions can give them the other attitude and the approach of the question. When people disagree and provide the opinions which we never thought may give us more opportunities for our life. For instance, the advice which are given by my friends about my nosiness last year has made my company run more smooth than before. He gave me the analysis which in other way made me know whether I have enough funds to entering to new market. As the results, it provided me a good chance to make my business gain better performance in long-term run.

 

In my opinion, we should have some friends who always have same opinion, but we also should have some people who have different opinions. Different opinions provide not only other options, but also can help us to improve our vision in various ways. It is worth for us to make better decisions which improve our performance of working and living.

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