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It is quite common for some high school graduates to take a gap year

2019-10-17 16:26| 发布者: admin| 查看: 475| 评论: 0

简介:It is quite common for some high school graduates to take a gap year after they finished high school studies in a number of countries
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It is quite common for some high school graduates to take a gap year after they finished high school studies in a number of countries. The supporters claim that through this gap year, the university newcomers can be better prepared when they enter college. However, there are also disadvantages of taking one year off before going to university.

One of the biggest advantages of taking a gap year is that students can better understand themselves through various activities in the one-year period. Through traveling, volunteering, or working in the communities, these university freshmen can better understand their strengths and weaknesses through interacting with people from all social classes. This preparation is quite essential since students will have to choose their own career path in the university. Since most university education is quite theoretical, the gap year experience can sometimes prepare more practical social and applicable skills for the students.

However, students will also face financial difficulty in case they choose to take a gap year. Since they don't have a university degree, it is difficult for them to find decent jobs. Therefore, taking up a gap year sometimes will pose a huge financial burden on the student's parents. Moreover, these young people may lack self-control and spend a huge amount of money on harmful things such as computer games or drugs.

To sum up, taking a gap year may better prepare a high school graduate for his future career planning in the university. On the other hand, it can also bring some financial difficulties to the student's family. The students are therefore suggested to think cautiously before making the decision of having a gap year. Their parents should also give them some guidance and let them fully utilize their precious time before college.

 

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