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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change

2019-11-15 16:51| 发布者: admin| 查看: 839| 评论: 0

简介:Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend do you agree of disagree?
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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.  To what extend do you agree of disagree?

 Climate change has exerted tremendous influence on our daily life as well as it is difficult to maneuver the nature phenomenon, so personally, i could not agree more with this statement.

 With the development of technology and science, not only people can predict the changes in climate, but also they can probably control the climate in the future. Nowadays, plenty of satellites rotate around the earth in the universe, what it can do is that observe the the movement of clouds even the storms and then calculate the time when these phenomenons will arrive to the land. Thus we have lots of weather foreshadow websites and apps, some climate observations are constructed. Although we can foresee the future climate change, why something disaster incidents always happen when the weather phenomenon comes?

 What we should do is that find a way to survive in that situation rather than to prevent it because no technology can stop even diminish it. All the catastrophic climates always impose numerous effect on our survive. For an extremely instance, the flood leads coastal cities to be submerged. As we know that this disaster is sudden, modern advanced technology cannot prevent all the climate changes, compare with focusing on that technique, people should reinforce the defense of coastal side, such as utilizing the taller walls to prevent the ocean crash, or perfecting the method emergent retreat. For example, government can set some broadcast in everywhere and distribute the escape buses as a back-up. Furthermore, confirming the construction of building is another essential point. When the climate changes, government should deter people leave in the street even inform the school closed at once and all the people should stay indoors.

 In conclusion, despite preventing climate change, i firmly convinced that people should not fight for nature, we should obey the climate development and try to survive with it.

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